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Comic 1419 - Memory Shard - Noctis/Aurelia page 5 ( Guest comic by argylefox )

29th Sep 2016, 1:23 AM
Memory Shard - Noctis/Aurelia page 5 ( Guest comic by argylefox )
Average Rating: 5 (6 votes)

Author Notes:

Centcomm 29th Sep 2016, 1:23 AM edit delete
Centcomm
Im not going to jinx anything by commenting on my medical condition .. but im recovering from having the stent placed and all the other stuff ..

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Comments:

mjkj 29th Sep 2016, 1:48 AM edit delete reply

Great ending, Argyle.


Ok, Cent, get well soon... *hugs carefully*

argylefox 29th Sep 2016, 2:20 AM edit delete reply

Ending?
mjkj 29th Sep 2016, 3:14 AM edit delete reply

Oh, the sidestory continues? Great... =)
HiFranc 29th Sep 2016, 1:58 AM edit delete reply

I recall reading and/or seeing that ending somewhere before.
Sheela 29th Sep 2016, 2:17 AM edit delete reply

Wait, what ?
sigpig 29th Sep 2016, 8:08 AM edit delete reply

Read the blog, Sheela...
Ryu Santos 29th Sep 2016, 2:13 AM edit delete reply
It's over? No cliffhanger? Great story Argylefox.

And Cent get well at a reasonable pace.
argylefox 29th Sep 2016, 2:20 AM edit delete reply

Not yet.
Dragonrider 29th Sep 2016, 2:15 AM edit delete reply

Hope recovery goes well. Don't rush it you really aren't as well yet as you think you are, take it from the voice of experience.
Guest 29th Sep 2016, 4:28 AM edit delete reply
I'm not trying to be a critic, but didn't someone's white hair clean up awful fast? Or is that just how someone remembers it?
argylefox 29th Sep 2016, 8:28 AM edit delete reply

You have it dead on there. Later on you will see a little more 'real' version. This whole thing is an old memory from when she was a child - it isn't great. That is why the shadows are so stark, and colours vivid. And why Noctis has no shadows on her, but her clothes are pitch black. It's MOSTLY real, but not really real.
Gilrandir 29th Sep 2016, 8:37 AM edit delete reply
I am enjoying the story and think (at least insofar as I am any judge) that you have done a fine job bringing it to life, @argylefox. (I particularly like the last panel here with the introspective Aurelia looking backwards with her mug of coffee/tea.) So much of the original story seems (to me) to take place in the internal monologues of the participants that it must have been challenging to select scenes that would complement the narrative and move as much of the story as possible out of the realm of the textual and into the visual.
chk 29th Sep 2016, 12:21 PM edit delete reply

Rest and take it easily CentComm.
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